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Renga

Page history last edited by PBworks 17 years ago

Post renga verses here:

 

Disjointed tangents

A concept coalesces

Speech enlivens thought

-David

 

Segmenting the flow

Alters the reality

Journey is to be

- Brian

 

Renga, not haiku?

I don't know the difference

someone explain please

- KevinRb

 

There is difference

I will explain, just look here

Not proper format

- AnthrAx

 

Haiku is cellular

Renga seems more organic

Parts within a whole

-David

 

early and often

fragment of code repeats, stills

envelopes connect

-ShareRiff

 

once we get warmed up

we'll get to that prescribed way

of counting moras

-ShareRiff

 

Here is a novel idea,

Peace when the blood hits the screen

- AnthrAx

 

My child torn from me

My bed empty as the void

Screaming solves nothing

- David

 

From whence Karmic debt

My suffering confuses

God I sound fucking Emo

- David

 

Judgement passed, I failed

Condemned by my own critique

Self-analysis

- David

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