Post renga verses here:
Disjointed tangents
A concept coalesces
Speech enlivens thought
-David
Segmenting the flow
Alters the reality
Journey is to be
- Brian
Renga, not haiku?
I don't know the difference
someone explain please
- KevinRb
There is difference
I will explain, just look here
Not proper format
- AnthrAx
Haiku is cellular
Renga seems more organic
Parts within a whole
-David
early and often
fragment of code repeats, stills
envelopes connect
-ShareRiff
once we get warmed up
we'll get to that prescribed way
of counting moras
-ShareRiff
Here is a novel idea,
Peace when the blood hits the screen
- AnthrAx
My child torn from me
My bed empty as the void
Screaming solves nothing
- David
From whence Karmic debt
My suffering confuses
God I sound fucking Emo
- David
Judgement passed, I failed
Condemned by my own critique
Self-analysis
- David
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